fix: purge AI slop from judgment essay, add voice linting pipeline
- Killed 16 em-dashes (Claude fingerprint, 15.9/1000 words -> 0)
- Replaced all clause-dash-elaboration patterns with periods, colons, restructuring
- Removed 'The One-Sentence Version' section (restated the intro, voice anti-pattern)
- Broke tricolon at lines 56-58 (too-clean parallel structure)
- Collapsed 'How to Actually Help' listicle into connective prose
- Added receipt link for ~100x inference cost claim
- Heading dashes replaced with colons (Tradesman Analogy, Excellence vs Functional)
New tooling:
- scripts/lint-voice.sh: mechanical anti-slop linter (em-dashes, trigger words,
hedging, filler, receipts, sentence uniformity)
- .amplifier/skills/voice-check/SKILL.md: LLM-as-judge voice authenticity check
(8 dimensions against VOICE.md profile)
- .amplifier/AGENTS.md: standing rule requiring both checks before any publish
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Ken
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